Life isn't for sissies.
Tumor
You hide
for ten years
and now
bend snaky fingers
around
these nerves
leaving
stale sensation
and
bruised pride--
silently
wrapping yourself
around
inner places;
breathing
pulsing
stealing
life’s blood.
I thought
you
were gone
but…
five
and a half
weeks
of radiation
he said.








18 comments:
Wow. Life is not for sissies.
I am wondering, hoping that the tumor is not growing close to home.
On a lighter note...I am SO behind on my Gift reading, and have started three poems but life has been so loud that they just wait...quietly, until I am stirred with their release.
Turns my thoughts to gratitude to God for His love and care through all we do not yet know...
reading this brings a shudder to me.
my mom had a brain tumor, a broken back and porphyria attack all in one year.it was the most awful year of my life. but it was also the one in which i was on my knees and closest to God for most of my days.
whoever you have written this about, i have whispered a prayer for them.
as for your actual poetry, it is powerful. i can understand that it caught you off guard.
Words not many but powerful!
Laura, is this "rap" about you? Or a loved one? I pray this is not the situation. Please let me know when you can.
Love & Smiles,
Amber
what to say..
Laura, I do love you. Radiation coming in, but what you radiate out, friend...
Monica
You are no sissy. I've prayed for you today.
(By the by, my word verification below is "bless." That would be for you, I presume.)
This life is certainly not for sissies and your writing here in the end...sucked the air right out of me. Care to share more?
Love ya
In a word: WOW!
Breathe...
Praying...
Listening...
Peace...
praying...
This is good. Hard. Beautiful in its authenticity. Calls forth compassion....
Very good as usual Laura.
I too am wondering if this is something you'll be going through?
You're no sissy. :)
Love ya,
Valerie
Oh,Laura,
I'm praying my friend.
Love you!
Breathing slowly, oh so.
You've taken pain and wrapped it in this. Look at you. (Hugs, btw)
I don't know who you meant this for, but tonight, (to me) this is for:
a dear friend who died five years ago
a co-worker who died yesterday
a mom who survived
a child still fighting
Thank you for putting my feelings to words.
When we write of such things it sends healing into this place. These words are harsh:
"breathing
pulsing
stealing
life’s blood"
Thoughts and prayers for your friend.
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