Tuesday, July 14, 2009

RAP

This week's poetry prompt has been sitting with me, waiting. This one pulled a sneak attack. Me--unsuspecting when suddenly it fell down on me, heavy weight pressing on lungs.

Life isn't for sissies.


Tumor

You hide
for ten years
and now
bend snaky fingers
around
these nerves
leaving
stale sensation
and
bruised pride--
silently
wrapping yourself
around
inner places;
breathing
pulsing
stealing
life’s blood.
I thought
you
were gone
but…
five
and a half
weeks
of radiation
he said.


18 comments:

Liz said...

Wow. Life is not for sissies.
I am wondering, hoping that the tumor is not growing close to home.

On a lighter note...I am SO behind on my Gift reading, and have started three poems but life has been so loud that they just wait...quietly, until I am stirred with their release.

grey like snuffie said...

Turns my thoughts to gratitude to God for His love and care through all we do not yet know...

Claire said...

reading this brings a shudder to me.

my mom had a brain tumor, a broken back and porphyria attack all in one year.it was the most awful year of my life. but it was also the one in which i was on my knees and closest to God for most of my days.

whoever you have written this about, i have whispered a prayer for them.

as for your actual poetry, it is powerful. i can understand that it caught you off guard.

Tammy said...

Words not many but powerful!

Amber said...

Laura, is this "rap" about you? Or a loved one? I pray this is not the situation. Please let me know when you can.

Love & Smiles,
Amber

deb said...

what to say..

Monica said...

Laura, I do love you. Radiation coming in, but what you radiate out, friend...
Monica

Lyla Lindquist said...

You are no sissy. I've prayed for you today.

(By the by, my word verification below is "bless." That would be for you, I presume.)

Yolanda said...

This life is certainly not for sissies and your writing here in the end...sucked the air right out of me. Care to share more?

Love ya

LisaShaw said...

In a word: WOW!

Cindy said...

Breathe...
Praying...
Listening...
Peace...

A Simple Country Girl said...

praying...

Joelle said...

This is good. Hard. Beautiful in its authenticity. Calls forth compassion....

valerie said...

Very good as usual Laura.

I too am wondering if this is something you'll be going through?

You're no sissy. :)
Love ya,
Valerie

Shanda said...

Oh,Laura,
I'm praying my friend.
Love you!

L.L. Barkat said...

Breathing slowly, oh so.

You've taken pain and wrapped it in this. Look at you. (Hugs, btw)

Jennifer @ Getting Down With Jesus said...

I don't know who you meant this for, but tonight, (to me) this is for:

a dear friend who died five years ago
a co-worker who died yesterday
a mom who survived
a child still fighting

Thank you for putting my feelings to words.

sojourner said...

When we write of such things it sends healing into this place. These words are harsh:
"breathing
pulsing
stealing
life’s blood"
Thoughts and prayers for your friend.