you
teem
beneath me;
slip
out from under
my feet…
rush
between
my legs...
you
hold me,
watery womb,
and I
am weightless
in your arms.
moon pulls
and
curve
of earth
bends me...
I have not
crustacean legs
nor fin and gill
to traverse
your terrain;
yet,
you feel
like home.
I try
to hold
on to you
after splashy
dismount;
but
always
you
slip
through
my fingers.








10 comments:
Thank you for such beautiful imagery bound in these words. I can feel the caress of its waves and the taste of its salty spray. To the deep I am carried to ponder...
Shalom,
Denise
I read this post and some before it. Your writing is pure poetry and I greatly enjoyed it.
I've been walking the beach as often as possible lately and saw the broken parts of the sand dollars. I like your conclusion on them.
Melanie@Bella~Mella
I am there on the beach with the sand grains and the waves slipping through my fingers because your words have taken me there.
Captivating!
Blessings and peace dear one as you continue to experience GOD and share with us.
Love you.
that was a lovely dip.
thanks.
Makes me long for the warm ocean!
Poetry is always deep to read. I enjoyed yours.
Feels like home to me, too.
By the way, I've been praying for you---peace, joy, surrender, growth, blessing, coming out of refining fire good-as-gold, joy, love, greater intimacy with God...
Monica
I'm in awe of your poetry. It keeps getting better and better.
Blessings on your visit to the beach. It's so chilly here, I can't imagine a beach vacation this week!
You have a GIFT*
AN INCREDIBLE GIFT WITH WORDS
You capture the feeling of the ocean so beautifully! I love your writing, thanks for posting this!
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